eeyore_grrl ([personal profile] eeyore_grrl) wrote2020-11-03 09:48 am

Survivor Challenge #2 Keel Hauling





                  keel hauling my heart




don’t you know i loved you
	i gave you my heart the day you said you gave me yours
	you know i loved you
		but you seem not to have cared

and like a mutineer on a pirate ship of old
	you punish me
		your rightful law
	you punish me
		tie me up and throw me down
			into the water
	pull pull pull 
		under the ship i go
	salt in my wounds
		i try not to scream
		 try not to breathe
	back and body bashed against the boat
	as they pull me all to slowly
		under under 
				down i go


this is my rightful punishment 
	my heart tied to yours 
			forever
	our hearts 
		combined in love and hatred
 	our hearts
		combined

don’t you know
		i loved you










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[personal profile] wolfden 2020-11-05 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I can definitely relate to those feelings. I really like this. Great job.