[personal profile] eeyore_grrl
For this, first we do some definitions:

Good old Merriam-Webster, my favorite shade-throwing dictionary of the times, says:

Definition of sprezzatura
: studied nonchalance : graceful conduct or performance without apparent effort

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Okay, I can work with this... suurrrrre..... was my first line of thought. Then, I came across the fact that it is also used, specifically, in fashion. This article says, "There’s a rarified group of people who always look put together without looking like they’ve spent the whole day in front of a mirror. Italians call this blessed quality sprezzatura, a kind of “studied carelessness,” “careful negligence,” “effortless ease,”—or in Beyonce-ism, #IWokeUpLikeThis." (https://qz.com/937090/sprezzatura-the-italian-word-for-looking-effortless/)

And, there I had my topic, my poem:



			sprezzatura


so many times i’ve thought about how i dress
living through the fashion faux pas of the 80’s
i embraced the grunge of the 90’s 
because tee shirts, jeans, flannels, and docs
	make life so much easier
	and morning so much quicker

the look is effortless
	almost all of it interchangeable
	it almost always fits the way i bought it to
	almost always helps me blend into the background
					
i’ve never really understand fashion
	the fits of clothes that make it so i can’t breathe
	the shoes that try to make me taller than my 5 foot 2
		that really only land me on my ass because balance isn’t my strength
	the prices that grace the runways that could feed a small nation
	the obnoxious and ridiculous lack of pockets

I’ve held onto this style for almost thirty years now
	effortless
		grab a shirt
		grab some jeans
			i plan to go gently into my good days and nights
			wearing comfortable clothes and sneakers
				a flannel tied around my waist
				with a million earrings glinting in the streetlights
					telling of my survival

effortless
	i have arrived









Date: 2018-12-10 12:38 am (UTC)
murielle: Me (Default)
From: [personal profile] murielle
Brava! Wonderful! Yes to it all! Great take on the prompt!

Clothes should be effortless, or at least appear to be so.

Relatable and enjoyable!

Date: 2018-12-10 01:02 am (UTC)
tiger_spot: (glare)
From: [personal profile] tiger_spot
Nice!

Date: 2018-12-10 06:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] static_abyss
I know I've said before that I love that you include a reading of your poems, but I feel like it should be mentioned again. When I can hear what you wanted your poem to sound like, I find myself nodding along in all the places you add emphasis. Like, hell yeah the lack of pockets is ridiculous. Hell yeah runway fashion is ridiculously expensive.

Great job on this piece!

Date: 2018-12-10 07:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bsgsix
Ha, as a 5'2 woman, I feel so much of this. But hearing it makes it REAL. Hearing it put me back in those uncomfortable shoes and feeling grateful I am sitting in flannel PJ pants and a sweatshirt as I comment. What an excellent take on the prompt, and on expectation in general!

Date: 2018-12-11 01:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] the_eternal_overthinker
YAY! This is so me and I have no fashion sense is what many would say but I am comfortable in what I wear. I almost went this way but mine would have been an essay if I wrote it..This is so much better esp in your voice. Superb! Excellent! Kudos!

Date: 2018-12-11 05:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] rayaso
I've never understood fashion either or what the models have to go through to get that emaciated look. Wearing comfortable clothes is wonderful.

Date: 2018-12-12 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kehlen.livejournal.com
I totally understand your attitude...and I disagree with it - not for you, but for myself! *large smile*.

Everyone's style is their own, and while I, too, have nothing to do with this disgrace that is called fashion (I might, if hell froze over and they started sewing for people of all shapes and sizes, and not-these models who look so alien the thought of trying to dress anything close causes nothing but scorn). But for me, the effort of dressing, as I like to say "smarter than casual" is an important preparation for special occasions. It helps me get in the mood I need for them, - to set them apart from the everyday 'barely acceptable' look.

Date: 2018-12-12 06:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] megatronix
Oh I really like this! I love the end especially from "I plan" through to the end. Awesome!!

Date: 2018-12-12 10:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dmousey
Its taken me many years to not care whether or not I had sprezzatura! Always enjoyed as usual. Hugs and ✌😊🐭🐀💚

Date: 2018-12-12 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] bellatrixe
Such a great take on this topic.

Also, your shirt is purrfect (could not resist the pun. Seriously though, love that shirt!)

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